Dear all,
these are the solutions to the worksheet "Describing - The Tortilla Curtain". Please compare them with your answers and note down all the questions you have so that we can talk about those questions in class.
Step 1
Characters: "He had to laugh..."; "His face tightened..."; "...he winced."; "...her eyes were alive, shining..."; "...lips compressed around a private smile."; "...pouting, greedy lips,..."; "He'd promised."
Relationship: "There is no fruit here"; "...you promised me, didn't you?"; "...lips he wanted to kiss and own."; "...a young girl like her and an old man like himself..."
Hopes and Dreams: "A clean white one made of lumber..."; "...with a gas range and a refrigerator,...", "...a little yard..."; "...plant a garden..."; "...a place for the chickens."; "...maybe a TV and a car..."; "...the lure of all those things, washing machines, vacuum cleaners, the glitter of the North like the second Eden."
Step 2
CONFLICT
Candido: 33, experienced migrant worker, frequently been to the US, injured, cannot work, proud of young wife, lured her to US, promised her share of American affluence.
America: 17, first time in US, young and naive, pregnant, knows nothing of job situation, impatient to get things Candido promised, determind to get these things
America: eyes were alive, shining, compressed lips around a private smile, pouting, greedy lips
LANGUAGE
Candido: nearly twice as old as America, laughs at her naivety, wants America, has made promises he cannot keep (house, garden, electrical appliances), persuaded her to come with him under false pretenses ("what else was he going to tell her"?)
HOPES AND DREAMS
Candido: wants America
America: has material dreams ("glitter", "second Eden")
Step3
your individual structure!
Step 4
- the excerpt taken from " The Tortilla Curtain" by Boyle from 1996 depicts a Mexican couple who are in the US illegally
- first I am going to deal with the characters, then I will look at their hopes and dreams and finally I will describe their relationship
- the following quote backs up my description of Candido as having brought America to the US under false pretenses: "He'd held up the lure of all those things"
- to finish I would like to say that the text passage describes the material dreams that Mexican immigrants hope to realise in the US